Finished Piece

Dr. Avery · 09-24-2003, 12:55 AM

Well - This is what a month offline is worth...

http://home.comcast.net/~dr.avery/VexationFinalHQ.mp3

Give it a listen, and tell me what you think.

Thanks,
al

~*LdY*LaFFs*~ · 09-24-2003, 10:20 AM

Alrighty!! Good to see ya finished it

d/l'ed and one more to add to my PCTT radio stream playlist!!

Hey, you're on comcast now?

Dr. Avery · 09-24-2003, 10:28 AM

I've always been on comcast.

Well not quite

First I was on @Home (back when it was owned by Excite)
Then I was on AT&T broadband (After they Bought @home)
Now I'm on Comcast (after AT&T sold it to them)

Hopefully the network won't get sold off again this month...

Pasty901 · 09-24-2003, 10:32 AM

Thats brilliant doc!

Dr. Avery · 09-24-2003, 10:37 AM

Thanks, Pasty

Dr. Avery · 09-24-2003, 10:04 PM

critisism? please? anyone?

Fister · 09-25-2003, 02:55 AM

nice work
i think you need more of an edge
i like the piano thing in the foreground...

Wobbel · 09-25-2003, 05:11 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Dr. Avery
critisism? please? anyone?

NOT critisism, just my personal musical taste coming in here, remember 'Tristania' ?
I think it would be nice to add some contrast, like some guitar, the tristania way.
Put in something loud/hard, to accentuate the soft, mellow overall sound of this song.

Again, a very personal thought, and just an idea from a music n00b

FrYGuY · 09-25-2003, 05:42 AM

Needs more Kazoo.

In all seriousness, good work Doc.

MunkyGirl · 10-01-2003, 01:27 AM

Yay, I like it! I could never do it. Therefore, hats off...

Dr. Avery · 10-01-2003, 02:50 AM

Thanks, MunkyGirl. Glad you like it.

Welcome to PCTT - I hope you enjoy your stay

**DreamCaster** · 10-03-2003, 01:10 PM

Just had a listen here. Nice job Doc

I'm no expert in music, but I like the flow of it. I'd agree that something may be to be thrown in there to break it up for a verse or two

It almost sounds like it should be in a movie or something

09-24-2003, 12:55 AM	#1 (permalink)
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